Saturday, May 14, 2005
Anglo-Saxon Poetry and Deeping Coombe
The Lord of the Rings owes much of its distinct flavor to Tolkien’s love of Old English culture and language. Now he was a professional, a philologist and a professor of Anglo-Saxon at Oxford, so he knew what he was doing and we Middle-Earth lovers are the richer for it; I, on the other hand, am an amateur, thus of the fragment below I make no claims as to its perfect adherence to the real thing, but it is my attempt to imitate such and mostly just by ear.
I labor under a wearying load of poor health, so I have to take things as they come. That means I hope to pick up where I left off and, perhaps, even finish this someday.
Helm's Deep
Shadow on horse-lands, smoke-kindled. Withered the wood-smith’s walls to embers, Red was roof-fall, rafters crumbled, Bright-blazed homestead, hearth forsaken: Long-years labor lying in ashes. Hewn the fruit-bough, fair tree ax-dead, Cattle-herds slain, corn-houses broken. Star-mirror poisoned, sickened with death-taint. Loud rose the grief-cry, life-hope waning, As Rohan fled from farm to Deeping. Dread was the duskfall: doom fed it, The sword-bands ravened, ruin-greedy. Fell was their war-chant, fearsome shield-song, Loud with blade-beat, battle-gladness. Mordor saw them, men and Uruk, As strength he bided in shield-hall mighty. Cunning had tempted, trapped a stone-seer, Wound him in web-weaves, will-enshackled, Orthanc enslaved to Orodruin. The servant of Sauron slew men for him. Night came swift as Northmen trembled.
Then out of dream-grave, deep, long-buried, Theoden wakened and walked out of shadow. Sister-son he summoned to serve him. Came Eomer gladly, offered his sword, Kneeling in honor, in homage to Theoden. Rode they from Edoras, rain-shield golden, Young lord eager, his elder age-wearied, Scorning king-comfort, stern, bold-hearted, Son of the Mark-lords, Snowmane’s master. Left behind him Eomer’s womb-kin, Sister-daughter, Dunharrow’s captain. With him war-men, wielding sword-might, And new-beard younglings: need called them. Fealty they kept and faithful heart-oath, Spear-thronged, they guarded, gathered with him; Shining in armor and steadfast in king-love. Warnings sped them; the white-clad wanderer, Mearas steed-friend, spoke truth to Theoden. Warriors he left him, wing-footed hunters, Elf and Dwarf and Heir of Sea-kings, Lordly victors, valiant in battle.
To Hornburg they came, Hammerhand’s fortress Great were foe-wards guarding Deeping, The vale behind and hidden hollows, Winter-cold caverns cloven in splendor By Time under mountain, many rooms making. There the folk-clans, fear-mustered, waited, While Rohan’s soldiers readied without, Girt on sword-belt and sharpened war-blade, Arrows told, to each archer counted, Then bending the war-bow like baleful sky-ship Curled to spin a star-shaft deadly From highest heaven to the heart of the void-dweller. Purposed they stood upon the stone-heights, Fear honed to strong-heart, defying the shadows, As under deep roof-veil the enemy gathered. Bright was the fire that fled through storm-dark: War-drum beating, on the blackness it crashed. Fierce were the war-bands; from the wall men saw As from the world’s edge white flew sky-glare, A man’s-breath of daylight. Many there were Thronged in the valley, throat-loud, clamoring...
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